Lovely. The first stanza is my favorite. Nice imagery.

So, I read a few of your poems, and i really quite like them. Especially this one.

It's just... the way you express yourself that really has me hooked, and also, I guess, the way I can identify myself in your words too (though everyone says this, I suppose).

The last line is too good.

And this is pretty and funny and lovely and silly all at the same time. Which is a very, very good combination.

Yeah. I liked it.

. darkershadeofpale