Reviews for My One and Only |
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![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE DO CONTINUE. But if you don't have the time, well, it's okay. The story is all in your hands, Bei Bei! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story a lot! It's fast paced and easy to read. It made me smile. Very good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :))) From the start, I thought it was going to be best friends who fall in love, but then, I just only knew that Eric was gay at the second part. _ You got me there, and you really had me giggling. Eric's hot and awesome, but I feel sorry that his parents would kick him out. It's social injustice not to accept that your son is gay. You should continue. _ Maybe by then, he'll start becoming hetero and maybe... :DD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will be waiting! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D I'm liking the story. The grammar and writing is very good, and even if it's just the first chapter, you see their relationship and how Jodi is starting to fall for him. It seems very Will and Grace-like, but that's not a bad thing. I'm a fan of the show and I know how it ends, but I have a feeling that though this story shares a similar likeness with the series, it will erupt into altogether a different storyline. AM SUBSCRIBING. LOVE YOU. |
![]() ![]() Hmm.. Looks like Jodi's in for some trouble. Love the plot, by the way. :D |
![]() ![]() i like. too short. update. |
![]() ![]() They're so cute together! Didn't find any errors, good job! Can't wait for chapter 2.. I hope there will be a chapter 2. |
![]() ![]() Awesome plot! Your writing is definitely easy to understand, props for that. Just a couple of repetitions of some words but other than that, enjoyable. More! |
![]() ![]() Nice work. Wish it was longer, though! Is Eric gonna go straight or something? Update soon, please. |
![]() ![]() I like it. Simple but interesting plot. I await the next chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, really nice plot. Your story is also easy to read. I am hooked. ;) I can't wait for the next chapters. Eric and Jodi really have chemistry. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay, so of course the summary dragged me in. Eric sounds super hot. can't wait to read more! |