Reviews for The Hostage
Ren chapter 12 . 3/11/2017
Such an amazing and emotional story... loved it and this ending though, I'm in tears!
oneuserz2 chapter 12 . 8/7/2016
This was the best story I have ever read on here (the most graphic one too). The idea of victim/abuser relationship is cliché and unrealistic, but the way you wrote the story made it totally enjoyable. I couldn't stop reading! The mature content was very explicit, but hey, you warned us haha :p (embarassingly, I liked reading it).
Your writing style is almost flawless and straight to the point, which was perfect for this story!
If you ever make a sequel, I'm clearly going to read it :D
Guest chapter 12 . 10/25/2015
very good story..
disgusting chapter 12 . 1/23/2015
Fucking rapist fucking pimp dont care what his reasons are. He obviously should go to hell and she obviously has stockholm syndrome. The lead guy is so fucking disgusting. This story is just so absurd. What girl wouldnt hate a guy who gets money out of selling her own body for sex and who physically hurts her? God this is delusional and so fucking sick. It makes me want to puke. The girl should go to a psychiatrist and the guy deserves to rot and die in jail. Its because of stories like these that glorify abusive relationships that many people believe that something loke this could work when in reality you're gonna drop dead one way or another for being with such a psycho.
m33l chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
i read the story yesterday till 3 in the morning and I enjoyed every single word of it ... the only thing I didnt like was that we did not get more to know about jasons life and about what he did when he was away most of the time

it is also the best hostage story I foubd on this site so far and I started looking for similar once .. but could not find any :/

wish you would write a sequel to this one

Karin chapter 12 . 1/3/2013
Best hostage story I have ever read! just a few things I didn't like, well well. Great work! :) Can you recomende a similar story?
guest chapter 12 . 11/10/2012
omg make a sequel! THE RETURN OF JASON!

and I felt this was kinda fast-paced and there should be more moments but other than that it was great! you're a fantastic writer!
Marilyn a.k.a Wolfshifter chapter 12 . 12/24/2011
I love this story! I'm hoping there's a sequel!D
Susan Holt chapter 12 . 9/5/2011
Now, THAT'S what I call an ending to a story! God, how much I dig angst sometimes! :))

I think it was the perfect ending... had you asked me a few months ago, I would have told you something bitchier about Jason... kudos to your writing talent for making me change my mind like that! I'm not a Stockholm Syndrome fun, but I guess this is a story with fictional characters and therefore one has the liberty to do whatever they feel like with it.

They fell in love... awwwww... I'm sappy and abysmally romantic and I love it, deal with it! :)

I don't know if I should feel weird that I actually liked Jason at the end... I probably should... rapists are not sensitive... for the sake of this lovely story, I will not feel weird. :)

It was an intense story for sure and probably one of the few in here that actually managed to make me feel all kinds of emotions. It was an excellent read, peculiar and off-beat and for that, I appreciate it even more.

Good luck, guys, in anything new you endevour! :)
pbgurl chapter 12 . 9/2/2011
As excited as I was to read the epilogue, I am sad to see this story ending. :( Though what a great ending. I like the way you left it with him going to fix his life but that the two of them will wait for eachother. I'll tell you, you got me to change my mind about Jason. At first I disliked him for what he was doing to her but these last few chapters I really started to love the guy. :)

Looking forward to new upcoming stories from the two of you!

-Liz :D
Jensi chapter 12 . 8/29/2011
Oh I loved this. Such a sweet ending to a tragic and horrible, but I ended up liking him and his desire to change. Good job!
E. D chapter 12 . 8/29/2011
I hope there is a sequel Or one-shot.
foxyricanlady chapter 12 . 8/29/2011
oh please tell me that theres another part to this epilogue or a sequel or something cause if it ends there i just might die...
Honestly I Promise You chapter 12 . 8/29/2011
One word:


I don't have much to say on this chapter, other than it was very fitting and very realistic. You will be on my author alert!
Susan Holt chapter 11 . 8/28/2011
Okies... AMAZING!

Seriously, you just became my favourite, guys!

How on earth did I start worrying about Jason's life & future plans, I have no idea!

I'm glad that Gavin got what was coming for him!

I don't know if you're keeping them together or have them lead different , distant lives, but seriously, I'm expecting the best epilogue ever!

You can make it sappy, romantic, angsty, teary... Whatever it is, I dig it already!

I also like the fact that the story was only 12 chapters.

I'm keeping my raving review for the epilogue. .Job!
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