Reviews for Lots of Thoughts
A Fire Rose chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Very relatable poem! I still believe a set rhythm would improve your work in general, but I enjoy it. I'm sorry this review is not terribly comprehensive, but feel free to contact me if you have questions. And, although I'm not sure you intended it, you had a pretty cool rhythm with a few of the lines-

"my every selfish whim

and the deeper, philosophical meaning

of everything I take in."