Reviews for With Bite
nikkilittle chapter 1 . 5/5
I don't remember any girls in high school this aggressive. It was back in the innocent 1970s. Except that cheerleader with the crooked teeth. Such a beautiful face. And then she smiles with the most hideous bunch of crooked teeth I ever saw in my life. Rich parents saved her and bought her braces. Never would have been able to marry her off if they hadn't fixed her teeth. She flirted with every boy in school. Even me because with my no makeup, flat chest, and boy's shirt and blue jeans, she thought I was a boy. Boys often had long hair back then. We gingers can be hard to specify sometimes. Her eyes sure opened wide when she realized her mistake.
SwimmingThroughExistance chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
hilarious! i like your humor...
Exsomnis chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
He was just too cute!
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
I quite liked this, it was a bit all over the place, but that kind of added to its charm. The summary was what really pulled me in, because that part was exceptionally well done. The main character was very creative and random :D

Good work (: