Reviews for Under the Trees
Casot chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
How tragic. I thought it was lovely written, and the ending just made it even better, in a wierd way.
Crystalynn chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
That's terribly sad. It may be better suited to the horror category than simply young adult. One word comes to mind: Emo.

I think teenagers would enjoy this piece.
quillpen13 chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
Nice short story! Very vivid and it flows well. It made me think of little red riding hood for some reason...

The beginning is slow because the adjectives are excessive and the action is low. in my opinion, shortening it and cutting some description would hold attention better.

The whole attack with the blood and the ripping and the struggling is all very vivid (and very good) but I think it lacks the person's desprate, fearful feeling. You don't really know what's going on inside their head, only whats happening to their body.