Reviews for Don't Call Her Cinderella
FairyTaleDreams chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
I don't even have words. This has to be one of the most adorable and realistic one-shots I've ever read (yes, despite the wedding scene) :D I absolutely LOVED it. Keep writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Hmmm...it would hav made more sense if he had given up the inheritance or whatever and proved his luv for her...just is not the same otherwise..she should move on..
StarlightAbyss chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
My dear, you've just gained yourself a new fan of me! I love how beautifully you've drawn your characters and really made the emotions all come out in this story! I actually cried at the end... Kinda embarrassing cos I really don't cry much these days... My vocab just disappeared trying to describe how this made me feel! Although the ending was a little abrupt and all, this is one of the best I've ever read, truly!:) here's to you!

Cheers,
*Star
Laurieleigh92 chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
I like this story for being different, you know. For not being a definite "we're back together" end which is usually the norm! Fantastically written.
Capture.My.Moments chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
I must admit, i found this story very refreshing, nothing like the usual sappy story, but still i was really disappointed in Xander. I just gotta put it out there, no offence though, cause the story was written wonderfully but i felt that Camillie deserved so much better. In my opinion, Xander was an asshole, if he really loved her the way he claimed to, he would've worked harder to keep them together, to find a loop instead of just giving up from the beginning. I mean grow some balls! Im not saying that he didn't love her, im pretty sure he did, but just taking everything as it was and thinking everything could be better after letting Melissa do all the work to save a relationship that wasn't even hers, i really lost some respect for him. Sorry about all my angry ranting, I guess im just disappointed in his character. I really hope there would be a sequel that would hopefully change my opinion of Xander, because this was a great start to what could be an really beautiful story :)
theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
This was brilliant ;)
I'll let you die chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
I really liked the ending. I though it was going to be something cliche but it wasn't.
found.eventually chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Xander. I like that name. :)

And I liked the ending, because I expected some sort of cheesy, cliched ending but you've surprised me. The story is long, but it's no where near boring, and it's the kind of story that I wouldn't hesitate finishing in one-sitting.

It was a really good read.

Thumbs up! :)
Taylor Wrote chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Wow this story was simply amazing. Extremely well written too, just as good as published work. I liked Cami and Xander's relationship, very cute. I also liked Mel as well. I like the ending too, how they don't just instantly get back together. Great piece of writing.

Congratulations on your other story as well.
Julietish chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Congratulations on getting honorable mention for this amazing one-shot! :)

I really loved the dynamics between Camille and Xander's relationship. It had that fiery aura, fueled by Xander's secrecy and Camille's heartbreak. Melissa was seemingly perfect, much to my regret. She left me wondering what her flaw actually was. Xander made me feel so frustrated! Does he really not see what a terrible effect his secret engagement has on his girlfriend of three years? I really hope she makes him grovel. As for the incorporation of the white mask, it was lovely! If you were to stalk my weheartit, you'd see that I have a slight obsession for beautiful masquerades. The cliff-hanger was amazing, props for that!
Ms.Imperfection chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! It was really sweet and I love how you made the heroin a typical girl who gets hurt but doesnt simply roll over when told!
InkWitch chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
awesome awesome awesome.

well written, well composed, and awfully realistic.

man reading this felt like tasting a juicy tender piece of steak.

(yes i just compared ur work to steak)

THANK YOU FOR THE READ.
MADdreamers chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Even though there were a few spelling errors, this story overall is very well written. The storyline was great and the characters were nicely portrayed. Fantastic job and thanks for sharing this.
JustWords chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
LOVE this oneshot! Omigosh, I SO want more! :D About... perhaps... Melissa and her other interest? -evil grin- Just saying...

This was written with amazing talent, can't wait to see what else you've written :)
SweetSarah2 chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Okay, I liked this story and I LOVED the whole idea of it.

But...it really annoyed me how she didn't get mad at him. Every time she was around him she went all meek and quiet. In reality she probably would have thrown a shoe at him or something.

Anyways, wish it had more passion and emotion but otherwise.

FANTASTIC STORY!

Keep on writing... D
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