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Spare chapter 1 . 11/26/2017
I don’t really review, but this story was so annoying. Although Rob was a complete ass and he himself hurt her, he was always there when. They had a wonderful chemistry. She kept on about how Jon was kind and sweet but he accused her without so much as asking for an explanation, screwed her, left her, didn’t contact, didn’t even wish her happy birthday and broke up with her over the phone after saying he was there to fight till the end. Im a sucker for happy endings and people ending up together but she should’ve just ended up maturing and figuring out she’s strong and doesn’t need the assholea in her life making her insecure and reliant on them. Her balls of steel should have been her own independence.

The writing was great - lots of emotions, just the story life was arrghh
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 16 . 7/18/2013
I'm honestly so sad that's over :( I loved this chapter and the fact that she ends up with Jon. When she started singing, I laughed so much. When he said that he didn't love her I just... Well that depressed me. However the fact that he decided to use the video for their pre nups made me smile again. Thank you for this amazing story! :)
ash chapter 15 . 7/11/2013
I'm glad she didn't stay with Rob. VERY glad. But...what about Jon?
ash chapter 14 . 7/11/2013
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.
ashley chapter 11 . 7/11/2013
No, no, no, no, no. I don't want Rob. I'm totally PISSED that Kara is allowing herself to do this. Yeah, she's hurt. Yeah, she's got history with this DICKWAD, but no she cannot hurt Jon. I kind of hate Kara for running to Rob. AFTER ALL THIS.

How is Jon gonna see this? there is no fixing the relationship if she runs to Rob.
ooglemac chapter 15 . 7/11/2013
oooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this is good.
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 15 . 7/11/2013
As much as I loved Rob, this seems right. Amazing chapter! :)
mylittlePRINCESS chapter 14 . 7/10/2013
Update soon.
Midnight113 chapter 14 . 7/7/2013
Aw, I loved it! It was noble of him to step back, and I do love Rob. :) Thanks for updating this story!
Gg chapter 14 . 7/7/2013
Wow, I've always wanted Kara and Rob to get back together but Jon can't just give her to Rob, she's not a possession ! And Rob seriously ? She just got left by her fiancee and your already claiming what's 'yours' -_- I love this, can't wait to see what happens next...
ginabobina chapter 14 . 7/2/2013
I just spent a whole night reading your stories. I think you are a great writer who conveys emotions so easily. I found myself trying hard not to cry. I loved Rob in the first book but then he became a guy who always ruins Kara's happiness or peace. The last chapter made me sad. I wish she had chose Jon they had cuter moments and he helped her become a happy person after the whole Rob debacle. There are other chapters left so I can't wait to see what happens. Update soon
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 14 . 7/2/2013
Sighhh. I love this story so much. And I feel so bad for Jon (and her) but I wish that she'd finally accept Rob! :) Update soon? :D
Guest chapter 13 . 6/16/2013
Wow! This story is so, so,so amazing. Seriously!
Amy chapter 13 . 6/13/2013
I actually don't understand why anyone likes I understood him in the first story and he served his purpose. However, in this sequel he just comes off as fucking creepy and an actual stalker and I'm frustrated as to how the MC doesn't see that. He traveled 40 minutes to go the supermarket every time to see her, to keep pursuing an engaged woman? He somehow got her cell phone number after she changed it? He 1) followed her to her house 2) knew where her house was? He won't take no for an answer and keeps showing up places he knows she'll be at? That's fucking creepy not romantic.

Also I hate Jon. He's a fucking asshole. Him forcing himself onto her in their last sex scene - sounds a lot like rape. Him calling her a whore without proof? Not fucking wishing your fiance a happy birthday? He's so messed up.

I'm so frustrated with the MC for not knowing she's BETTER than Rob and Jon AND Vicky. She needs knew friends jfc.

With all that saying - I don't mean this to be an attack against you I want that to be clear! Your writing is superb and it's hard to come across people who write as well as you on this site :) I'm just so pissed off with the situation omg.
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 13 . 6/13/2013
Another chapter out so fast :) Thank you! I loved this one too. A lot of what she is thinking is right, the roles have been reversed. It is good that she finally made a decision for herself... although I think she does feel some guilt. Poor Rob :( I also think it's good that she escaped for a little while to think. Despite what she thinks, I believe that it did help her sort a few things out. I can't wait to read more!
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