Wow this story made me want to cry for 'The One Who Lost Her.' The fact that he loved her enough to want her to be happy with someone - even if it wasn't him. Lucy is certainly an amazing person if she can have a story written this well with such a great idea dedicated to her.

I wish that there would be a sequel to this even if I'm not sure how it would work - if it would work. But I like everyone to be happy so that's expected of me.

wow this is sweet! well writen! :)

So I've decided - you making me want to cry for the poor boy who lost her you should have to write another story in which he gets together with someone else. And is happy.

Amazing story :)

This is brilliant and so very adorable.

I don't know if you've ever watched a movie called Win a Date with Tad Hamilton (or something like that), but that's the first thing that came to mind when I read this.

The letter, it blew me away. I love the way you structure your sentences and how you don't need 9381290310 pages to get your message across.

Omg the letter. THE letter. It actually kinda makes me wish that there's more to this and Katie ends up being with him again.

Then again, that would make it really cliched, so nevermind. Well done, you!

This is good. You also cut it off really well. 3

you should really do a sequel. so cute. it's wonderful. love the description.

ever thought about a sequel? like about the one who lost her? this is a good story :)

squillink x

ahh. . . brilliant as always. love your work, but everytime i review i'm always too lazy to sign in. love the guy's description of her, love that you wrote this for your friend, love that Katie likes almost everything i do :P i'd ask for a continuation and for this not to be a oneshot, but knowing you, this is all you'd let us see, the rest is probably in your head and only you know everything about them, you evil person you.

brilliant job! keep writing.

Is it a bad thing to wish that Wes dies a painful death. I want blue checkered shoes to win! Oh heavens your stories always make me in a odd mood.

What an incredibly brave person... letting go of someone you love is never easy and seeing them with someone else, wanting them to be happy. That's pretty tough!

I liked the letter though! I would have said maybe the girl needs to reconsider but as Wes also seems to care, maybe he really can make her happy!

Very nice story!