I had tears in my eyes when I was reading this - what a beautifully crafted short story.

Exact.

Excellent.

A gem.

This is very well writen, and it's heart stinging, espacially the end ! I think everybody feels like that every once in a while, for whatever reason. I know I do !

Anyway, well done ) !

Wow nicely done Vicky. It is angst, alright. It was as if I'm reading a diary and Amy's feeling gets right through me, though I'm pretty sure that the diary's not yours cuz you're slim :P

Good to see your talent never fades! Though I'm pretty sure I've lost my touch by now. Haven't been writing for more than a month now.

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Hey is it just me or everybody can't reply in our forum? I always get an error when I try to reply there. I miss you guys :(

Well, we all have our moments of insecurities. Anyway, this was very nicly writen, I really felt for Amy. I hope you continue writing soon ;)

When I read the first part of this, it was like you were describing me. Well, I mean the big green eyes, long brown hair part. I used to feel exactly like this, but then I got a little more confidence and accepted my body type. I hope this story doesn't reflect on yourself, because if it does, you shouldn't feel this way. Every girl is beautiful, and your body type doesn't define who you are. You define your body type. Stay strong sweetie! xoxo