Oh poor Cal - his sweetheart was kissed by another man (before HE had a chance to do it!) and then he had to cope with a crying/upset woman when he clearly had no idea how to handle it gracefully. Hee, hilarious!

O friggin pete, I LOVE THIS STORY.

I hope you can get more out soon. Also, you're around the same age as me, since I'm starting college in January (I would've started in August, but I got my applications in late). Good luck with balancing writing and school work. We're both going to need it.

Also: THIS STORY ROCKS MY SOCKS OFF! X)

This is a really great story so far, I hope you update it again soon!

Instant favorite! What a cute and funny story. I love twists on fairytales. Looking forward to more.

Jeez, poor princess. At a certain point it's time to say screw poise and grace and go the inappropriate language route in a way only a princess could. I'd be cussing someone out fierce, but then, that's why i'm not a princess. Poor Cal too, has no idea whats going on. i'd love to see what he has to the to the feary when all of this is said and done. _ i look forward to more updates.

Oh gosh you have no idea how happy I am that you've updated! 3

great chapter as usual - AND DAMN THAT BLASTED FAIRY. ): oh she's meddling all right,

And I just went to check out the character photos in your profile for the first time, and now I'm wishing I hadn't, because I realized that I preferred the way that pompous prince looked to cal. Curly hair apparently is eh-ish, especially when Mr. Annoying Prince has pretty hair. DASH IT ALL. ):

But yep - loving your story, and I get how school can be utterly ridiculous, so no pressure! (:

Have a great one and stay awesome -

Fena

Hi I just found your story today, this is really good

u/d sn :D

That fairy is such a bitch!

Hey I'm sorry about your dog. If it helps to know our puppy which was given to us bit my brother on the cheek and my family panicked for we didn't know if he was immunized. My brother had to get a 36,000 php (i think its 350 dollars something) immunization shots. Later only to find out the puppy was immunized. We have to give him. (grin)

Anyway... wow, with a bandit. Not bad. I wouldn't mind being kissed by a bandit myself...as long as he looks like Mario Lopez or something. LOL. You are actually getting better and better with the editing and grammar, compared to the first chapters.

Keep up the good work! Can't wait to hear more from your story!

I really love this story! And Cal resembles a character in a story I'm currently writing, so I had a lot of fun reading this update quicklyyy!

LOOOOOOL

this chapter made me laugh my butt off x) I couldn't stop laughing, especially the end for two reasons: 1) I love it when guys are jealous & 2) BOTH OF THEIR REACTIONS WERE PRICELESS :D

Can't wait for more!

Okay, so i'm completely hooked _ i'm really loving how this story is taking shape and i'm excited for more. Really excited...like 'screaming at the computer to update like that would work' excited. i can't help but see Cal as being adorably bad ass and awesome and puppy has officially made my day good. It's been a long while since i've found a story that entertains me so much. I'm really looking forward to more.

Oh, poor Cal. He must be seeing red with fury that his lovely fair lady didn't get to be kissed by his handsome self!

XOXO

Now this chapter makes SO MUCH MORE SENSE! Haha! I had to go back and read some chapters - not sure why FP didn't notify me of updates before...anyway, I love this story. It's currently my favourite. :) Hope the next update is soon.

LOL! Funny! I had to go back and reread a few chapters because the notification skipped a few updates and before I knew it, I began reading something without really knowing what had happened...I had to backtrack and realized that FP must have been on the fritz because I didn't receive a few chapters' worth of notices. So the plot went from Cal trying to send Valeera home to them staying with a bunch of bandits and her in this nice dress...magic bag? What? So I went back and read the missing timeline...and it's funny! I gotta say that I LOVE this story :) I really like Cal...one thing that sort of confuses me is why Cal starts to like Valeera almost suddenly? Or maybe that's just me?

Still, I love it all. Reading on... :)