|Reviews for The Keys|
| Ice Bubble chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
OMFG! Okay, at first, when I read the description, I was like, 'Oh, please don't let this be an Avatar rip off'. And guess what. It totally isn't! Actually, this is a VERY good introductory chapter. I practically see it being made into a movie.
One flaw, 'Along, you six are merely creatures with special abilities, meaningless and even unstable. Together, you six are all-powerful...' The part with 'Along' should be 'Alone' right?
I'm so proud of you! I really feel to give you an enormous huggle. :) Please update the story soon. I can't wait! XD
| IAmEmeraldfae chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
If I'm correct you marked this story as complete. Why? It is a good idea, and your writing style fits it. Please just try to write one more chapter. And you also said to give constructive criticism. Well maybe you should work on focusing on the main point of the story (The five elements) and less on the extra stuff (vampires?). Other than that I like it so far.