Reviews for Tales of the Desert
doors down chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
me likes :)

P.S. AN EXTRA GOOD STORY DESERVES AN EXTRA REVIEW :)
Franz Because I'm Awesome P chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
At first, my reaction was ? WHAT THE FUCK! I didn't know what Alejandra was AT ALL. First paragraph kinda sounded like a sexy young human female ;) but then you started on about how her babies covered in thick long spines and i'm like OH, OKAY. the whole giving it a name and gender? clever. :)

i liked this story. nice. i like how you said things.

Examples:

As her long legs searched the ground for bits of moisture, Alejandra

. Alejandra was tall, slender, and anything but plain.

good personification. and well written. Ordinarily I would not read something like this. but you have successfully captured my interest. you must have done SOMETHING right...right? :)

but then, you never disappoint, do you?

This one is a winner.