Reviews for Sins and Secrets
ramblingrobin chapter 2 . 12/30/2013
Ahhh! I really want more to this story! I have so many unanswered questions! I like it and I want more!
yellow1105 chapter 2 . 1/20/2013
I like this story so far. I hope you will continue to post.
Error-Author chapter 2 . 3/4/2012
Oh wow, this is honestly wonderful. I do check out everyone who drops by and leaves a name, but so rarely do I find a gem like this. It seems like Fictionpress is comprised of mostly readers.

Your writing is excellent- so easy and comfortable in your own style without being wordy or hasty in your pace. The atmosphere is simply wonderful. I can tell you know how to set a mood and stick to it. This whole piece is opening up so beautifully.

I so very much enjoy your characters, as well. I have a heartfelt love for a love interest who has actual backstory. You mention cliches- a cliche is only a badly written story. You should have no fear of being a cliche. You find that won't even cross a readers mind- your work is too good for that. You do everything right in writing and what a refresher that is.

Now, I notice with a small bead of fear, that your last update is coming up to a year. Are you in University too? It does terrible things to writers. I do hope you haven't give up on Sins and Secrets. This is truly one of the best pieces I've read in a very long time and I'd be sad to see it dead.

I hope real life is treating you kindly and writing will be back in your spectrum someday soon. I'll be keeping an eye on anything you do here on FP :)

-EA
Nique13 chapter 2 . 8/4/2011
Borrowing any of Aaron's was out of the question because his brother was several sizes larger at least four inches taller than him.

You forgot to put 'and' after larger.

I hope that you update soon.
Felicity chapter 2 . 5/16/2011
loved it, hope to read more soon )
CodPor chapter 2 . 5/11/2011
Not much seemed to happen in this chapter. Lots of exposition, but not a lot of content.
Blank Papyrus chapter 2 . 5/7/2011
This is really good. Im itching to know what happened to him to make him so emotional and jumpy.
Checkerspades chapter 2 . 5/7/2011
Awesome story, can't wait to read more :)
Esquirella chapter 2 . 5/6/2011
Hmm...hopefully Cameron can crack the code and get inside Finn's head.
Poptart Guava King chapter 2 . 5/6/2011
Your fear is not irrational. Thrift stores harbor horrific evils within their musty smelling depths. D:

and YAY new chapter!

Poor Finn, I wonder what happened that he can't even indulge himself in checking out a hot guy. D: that's a sad existence so live.
Poptart Guava King chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Finn sounds like a scared bunny. D:

Which made more sense before I actually typed it. oh well. sounds interesting, looking forward to it. Cameron sound hot. WHICH IS FANTASTIC. :3
Esquirella chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Great start!
CodPor chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
This is intriguing. I hope to see more.