Reviews for Sins and Secrets |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh! I really want more to this story! I have so many unanswered questions! I like it and I want more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story so far. I hope you will continue to post. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow, this is honestly wonderful. I do check out everyone who drops by and leaves a name, but so rarely do I find a gem like this. It seems like Fictionpress is comprised of mostly readers. Your writing is excellent- so easy and comfortable in your own style without being wordy or hasty in your pace. The atmosphere is simply wonderful. I can tell you know how to set a mood and stick to it. This whole piece is opening up so beautifully. I so very much enjoy your characters, as well. I have a heartfelt love for a love interest who has actual backstory. You mention cliches- a cliche is only a badly written story. You should have no fear of being a cliche. You find that won't even cross a readers mind- your work is too good for that. You do everything right in writing and what a refresher that is. Now, I notice with a small bead of fear, that your last update is coming up to a year. Are you in University too? It does terrible things to writers. I do hope you haven't give up on Sins and Secrets. This is truly one of the best pieces I've read in a very long time and I'd be sad to see it dead. I hope real life is treating you kindly and writing will be back in your spectrum someday soon. I'll be keeping an eye on anything you do here on FP :) -EA |
![]() ![]() ![]() Borrowing any of Aaron's was out of the question because his brother was several sizes larger at least four inches taller than him. You forgot to put 'and' after larger. I hope that you update soon. |
![]() ![]() loved it, hope to read more soon ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not much seemed to happen in this chapter. Lots of exposition, but not a lot of content. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good. Im itching to know what happened to him to make him so emotional and jumpy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story, can't wait to read more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm...hopefully Cameron can crack the code and get inside Finn's head. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your fear is not irrational. Thrift stores harbor horrific evils within their musty smelling depths. D: and YAY new chapter! Poor Finn, I wonder what happened that he can't even indulge himself in checking out a hot guy. D: that's a sad existence so live. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finn sounds like a scared bunny. D: Which made more sense before I actually typed it. oh well. sounds interesting, looking forward to it. Cameron sound hot. WHICH IS FANTASTIC. :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is intriguing. I hope to see more. |