I've read all 5. Interesting.

JD Fly

Reading this one gave me goose bumps (the good kind!)

GREAT work _

Touching T_T

Very good. I like it. But try to avoid repeating the same word too closely together. In the beginning you said "day" and "life" a lot and it made it so the poem was hard to get in to. Repeating words that are in first person are fine but simple words like the ones mentioned above should be replaced with alternatives to avoid an uncomfortable repetition.