Reviews for Proof Positive |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Now you are just doing it on porpest... I think you enjoyed making us suffer wait to see whats gonna happen when they see each other and let me tell you my friend that cruel...lol but the chapter was great i would've like to see KC kick that Delilah on her ass but it still was really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() update again pls...it left a cliff hanger in the end...whoa...how will Jack react about it...plsssssssssssss |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok this one wasnt so short... but it was addicting as hell cause it left me wanting more so i hope an update soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope this is not the end it's labeled COMPLETE, but it's really incomplete because it doesnt have an ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() now that was a crime! after waiting for an update this chapter it too short... so im gonna do the only thing i can think off, and that it bed please please PPPLLLLEEEEEAAASSSSSEEEEEEEEE IM BEGGING YOU! UPDATE SOOOOOOONNNNNN... ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please don't just keep this a one-shot. It would make an amazing story so please make it a multi-chapter. Please? I'll bake you a cake! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a great story. I would love to see you make it longer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow i really like where this is going hope you update soon |