|Reviews for Lioness Roars|
| Ballistic chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
i agree. this does seem a little forced, but otherwise i liked it.
| Novienna chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
The rhyme scheme seemed forced and didn't work for me. Sounded too much like "I have a cat, his name is pat and we had a spat" sort. And that really seemed like the only focus of the poem for me. It sounded as if you tried so hard to rhyme in abab cdcd that the plot and meaning of the poem was lost.
| Finwe chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
I very much like the image you have painted. I wonder at the story between the lines.