Reviews for 永远
Hornet394 chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
well

naturally ok v gd

but then

u can have a pause/new line for 我知道/你是不会

and 像我爱你的/爱我

I think this is better

and actually naturally for chinese poems there won't be punctuation

and for the second last line, the 的 is excess