|Reviews for Summer's Breeze|
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 21 . 12/21/2012
Sorry I didn't review the last one...
I didn't feel like the last one had as much of a plotline... I mean it did, and it had a climactic chapter at the end, but there wasn't a lot of foreshadowing. I think in this one the climax was also quite short.
It's nice that all the loose ties are tied at the end of each story, yet each story continues into the next one and it evolves still.
I love how you have a paragraph at the end of each chapter about the gods/goddesses involved and how they felt. It was interesting to read.
Whenever I read, I try to put myself into the character's shoes. I tried to understand things from her point of view, and one of them was being deff. It actually scared the heck out of me because I'm already blind. XD
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
| NinjaBrocolli chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
tis is amazing!
| SofieAnn chapter 18 . 5/29/2011
I love your writing, its beautiful. I dont understand however why she is so hung up on him hearing her words. If he is completely fluent in ASL then she should be able to explain it just as well if not better to him. ASL is very descrptive and abstract. You are able to convey everything you want to.
I am also confused as to how she learned ASL if she was never around other deaf people or went to a residential school or anything.
Beautiful writing! Can't wait to read more and more! I cant wait to read the next two stories as well!
| Ching Ching Badabing chapter 15 . 5/25/2011
I was hoping that you would post this morning! A wonderful chapter, you have a way of making everything so real, like they're family that i want to visit...i miss them when they're not here lol
post again soon!
| SofieAnn chapter 2 . 5/5/2011
Hey! This chapter was beautifully written! I can't wait to have her go to ireland and interact with Shane!
I am just wondering what type of school Aine did growing up. Did she go to a residental Deaf school or did she just go to a mainstream hearing high school?
| SofieAnn chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
I am super excited to read this story! I read the first one and it was beautiful! I can't wait to see how this one turns out. I am a little confused how the Aine and Shane are going to communicate though since Aine mostly communicates in American Sign Language (from what i can tell in your first chapter) and Shane doesn't seem to know any sign language, let alone ASL. If he learned a signed language it would have been learned Northern Ireland Sign Languge, British Sign Language, or Irish Sign Language. I hope you update often because I cant wait to see how it turns out!