I LOVED THE STORY SO MUCH! Make an epilogue of the story, please! :D I'm sure other readers would enjoy that as well!

I really liked this story. I hope you do publish it, I would definitely buy it. Keep writing you are very talented

Thank you so much for not ending it in either of those places! you are a merciful soul and i love you for it. this was a nerve wracking last chapter but i'm glad everything turned out alright in the end. I'm looking forward to w/e you write next whether it's on here of fanfiction.

You know, for my sister you write a really good story. This is a book that I would go out and buy for my nook. So, get started editing. Congratulations.

Whoa, really fantastic update? Cant wait till your next update.

Gah! another cliffhanger! I'm glad for the update but you shouldn't keep doing this to your poor readers! anyway, it was a wonderful and insightful chapter but please update soon!

Not sure why, but I just felt bad for Zane through this whole chapter. I mean, I enjoyed it and it was interesting to see the "other side" from Akira's point of view, and to understand a little better about how Zane's mom's ghost ended up so...red. But the whole time I was reading it, I knew Zane was desperately trying to save her and my emotions were with him. I hope she comes back to him soon so they can have their happily ever after :)

Well I must say, I was delighted to see a new chapter! It's kind of fun that Akira did end up meeting Zane's mom. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

I'm anxious to know what will happen next. I hope Akira isn't really dead.

3 This Chapter! :) Happiness! Update soon!

I'm so sorry to hear about your mother and i'm sorry that this chapter was so emotional to write. It was a nice piece of closure though. I hope the weather is calm and peaceful for the memorial service you're going to as well as the one i have to attend, weather can be so exasperating. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter whenever you are able to write it and as always, i love what you write sweetie, and the emotional depth they have.

Oh, SO interesting. Not exactly the angry ghost Akira had led us to expect. Hmmm. Well, whenever the next installment comes, I will be delighted to read it.

Now I'm dying to know what happens next. I hope Akira isn't really dead and she snaps out of it. I'm glad Zane got to talk to his mom though. Good chapter and I'm sorry about your loss, all wounds heal in time.

I've been so busy and feel badly that I haven't been able to read and review in so long, but I finally caught up and I just have to say that it's become more and more engrossing and enjoyable with each chapter. I am finding myself more emotionally invested and really on the edge of my seat to see what happens to Akira. Learning about her past (as well as Rose and Henry's) was quite and emotional impact and the switches to Zane's point of view have been enjoyable. Can't wait to see how this all turns out. And when it's done, I hope you write more in this world. I feel there are a lot of potential stories that could be written there, and I'm certainly hoping to stay in it for a while longer. :)

I am a huge fan of your Jo/Zane fics and I just found time to read this one of yours. I couldn't put it down. It is amazingly funny, heartbreaking, suspensful and intriguing. Can't wait to see where you take this next.