This is a fantastic story! It's incredible that you've got a excellently-developed main character that a reader can be in tune with all along and yet still have so much to reveal about them, but you've done it.

damn that must suck to be Akira! Awesome chapter! Update soon!

AMAZING STORY! Incredible writing, I love it! Keep going!

argh, i HAVE to find out wat happns next! lol, i hate cliff hangers. keep updating.

Wow that was agreat chapter even though it was short and iit had a cliffhager eneding that i did not expect.

GAH! That a worse stopping place than the last chapter! Zane's mom possessed Akira, stuff's about to go down! please update soon!

Great cliff hanger. Can't wait to see what happens next.

O.O I understand why you stopped there for dramatic effect, but... I must know what happens! Will be watching impatiently for updates.

I LOVED this story so far! Amazing! Keep up the AMAZING work!

wow...what a chapter! So the truth behind the injuries finally comes out. Poor Akira, i wonder what's going through Zane's head. Anyway, you were right about a cliff hanger, but i'm looking forward to the next chapter, whenever you get around to posting it!

I figured her father had something to do with all those broken bones she had. Good chapter keep up the good work and update when you can.

You're right, that WAS quite a cliffhanger... Well that explains the injuries, in any case.

Love how this is in Zane's POV andi really don't understand why you want to redo the chapter, this is wonderful. I really hope the next chapter is up soon because it's jsut plain old mean where you left this off.

Oh, c'mon! I love this story! The cliffhangers are killing me though.

I thank you for writing this,

Margaret

Awesome Update soon!