I think it's cute how Zane and Akira's relationship is developing and I can't wait to find out what secrets she's been keeping to herself, like the relationship between her father and herself. I'm also glad she's getting over anxiety with ghosts and she's more willing to help them.

Haha. She's so good at talking around the point. This was a good chapter, though brief. I'll be delighted to see the next installment.

Looks like Akira's going to give in and take Dillon to the house with his grandmother. I hope everything turns out well and I'm interested in learning more about Akira and the relationship she had with her father.

Very, very good! :) I LOVED this!

Ooooh, I'm so looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Gah! how could you end the chapter there! that was cruel and you know it! anyway, like how Dillion and Akira are arguing because well, that's just like them. i really hope the next chapter is up soon!

I'm glad Henry and Rose were able to move on. I was starting to get so attached to Rose and Henry I was kind of sad that they left. I hope Dillon will be okay without Rose and maybe sometime during the story Dillon will move on. Great chapter and keep up the good work.

Oh geez. The whole time I was thinking in the back of my head, but what about Dillon? Whoops... He's going to be so upset. Also, poor Rose.

I still owe you reviews for the previous three chapters. Still loving this story and the journeys the characters are going on. Again you write just enough to leave me wanting more and to wish that the next chapter was already done.

I'm sure you'll get folks wanting to know Rose's resolution, but I'm fine with her walking through the door and her story ending there. I feel for Dillon though. I hope he doesn't go nuts.

this was an interesting chapter. I love the argument between Rose and Henry. Akira's point was really good but poor dillion! I wonder if they'll find another ghostly friend for him. I'm looking forward to the next part!

hm, this story just gets curiouser and curiouser. (yes i just quoted Alice in Wonderland, it's a fabulous story) Your summary chapter was wonderful! i loved the little commentary between the actions. This chapter got serious, which was a surprising change, but it held a lot of details that were nice to know. I got a little worried when Rose got angry but glad nothing terrible happened. I'm looking forward to the next part!

Oh, yikes. Poor Rose - that would be enough to give me pause - afterlife, door and all. This was an interesting chapter. I look forward to seeing where it goes.

Last chapter had me feeling sad for Henry, and now I'm feeling sad for Rose. Hope we find out there's something else for her, or that she's wrong...

Fave line "Might could be". Just really nailed his voice for me, though I had a good feel for it before.

And you know you've written good characters when I'm not even missing Zane in this chapter. :)

Good chapter. I'm interested in learning more about Henry and Rose's background. Sounds like Rose has some secrets. Keep up the good work!

I enjoyed reading this story. Overall this is very well written. You've developed the characters enough to where I feel like I have a relationship with them. Good job keep up the good work.