lol, i'm glad you posted this chapter! i wonder what Grace and Zanewere talking about. Also, lol, Akira seems to be the female version of Eureka Zane, talking during sex and about science no less, rofl. this was a good chapter though and i like how it turned out, Zane's thoughts were funny. i'm really looking forward to the next part though to see how they are after they've slept together.

Excellent, as always. I think more pool would be welcome, though actually reading more of the game may be distracting. As with anything, it would have to be about more than just scoring points. The subtle revisions between this and what the version you sent me are noticed and work great.

There's a level of sass here in Akira. It's welcome and fun to read. Zane doesn't know what he's in for ;-)

Hey I'm not logged in on my phone, but I'll post a non-anonymous review later. I just read through all these chapters and they're so good. The story seems good so far and I haven't noticed any glaring grammar or spelling errors.

Keep updating! :D

YAY! A new chapter! I've been stalking this story more than the Eureka boards lately. I can't wait to hear about Zane's past girlfriends. I actually really liked your text flirting. I just want to hear more about what she's doing for work. I get the feeling that it's going to be important to the story.

Can't wait for another update! Thank you!

wow, ok, this chapter made a lot more sense to me now that i wasn't reading it at 3am. lol, anyway, great chapter describing how Akira spends her time and how she settles into a routine. lol, Zane is so thoughtful and sweet! i wonder what the meeting is about though. hm...w/e, poor dillion, worrying over Akira. So looking forward to the next chapter!

Awesome as usual! Keep up the great work. I always get excited when I see your update in my email!

Woohoo! Update!

Really like everyone's tone in the story and would love if you could just go ahead and write your own fanfiction to get Akira and Zane in the sack ASAP.

One nitpick though. I'm not a fan of short hand text messages. Especially now that so many people have smart phones with full keyboards or at the very least predictive typing. It alwas looks like a teenager is writing when short form like that is used. That's a pretty small nitpick but it did throw me off quite a lot.

I enjoy this so much. It flowed really nicely and gave us some insight to all of the characters. I so badly want to know what Zane needs to talk to her about though, so I hope you can update soon.

I loved it, though of course I really want to read more. I can see why it would be hard to write, as it's sort of an in-between, "this is what's been going on for a while" chapter. I'm looking forward to more flirting :)

I stayed up late last night reading through the rest of the chapters because I was enjoying it so much. All the characters are likable and interesting, as is the town. I can definitely feel the spark between Akira and Zane. Rose and Dillon in the same house should make for some fun moments I'm sure. You have me hooked and I can't wait for another chapter.

awesome story, i cant wait to see where you are going with this story.

Awesome story. I'm really enjoying it. You definitely have a gift.

A great start. I was intrigued the entire way through. I didn't realize the boy was a ghost at first and I kept thinking of him during the interview so he made and impression on me. My only criticism is that I was struggling to picture what the characters looked like but that could come in further chapters. (KimMG from )

I so wish there was more! And that this was the finished story. I think I may even have to make a fictionpress account to follow the story.

Sigh... I really liked the end. Hard to say no to a pleading man with a gorgeous smile and warm hands.

It's funny, I had also not put two and two together about having Dillon and Rose in the same house. I wonder if they'll be able to interact in any way (besides talking, of course)? And I'm still really curious about how Zane's ability works...what does he see/feel/sense when he closes his eyes and touches Akira's hand in the last chapter? Almost makes me want to write a fanfic, lol.

Oh, and you know I'm always up for an M-rating. But I think you should just write what you want...that's what this site is for, right?

Can't wait to read more! ~Amy