Reviews for the chase
The Postscript chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
Well done. I think it's interesting that you titled the poem "the chase." One normally thinks of a chase involving two people, but the speaker seems to be the overwhelming voice in the poem, and you don't really learn much about a second person. It's also interesting that it's titled the chase when almost the entire poem is giving some sort of order/command/direction.

The last line of the first stanza is definitely an interesting choice, and keeps the reader intrigued. The line "let your diction only voice as whispers" is really awkward and confusing and takes away from a certain clarity that is present throughout the rest of the poem. Maybe play around with it a bit and see what you can come up with. Keep writing! Best, k.