Reviews for Perfectly Willing
sargentlooneypencil chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
hey.. sorry.. fp's giving me problems... i really really love this... tears are running down my face now.. i can feel the loss and the sense of emptiness... excellent job.. i really love it... i do... please please compile your work into a book.. i'm really sure that it'd be a best seller.. seriously.. i have read a few soul touching poems before and this is the best so far.. i really really love it.. i actually want to write more but i don't know what else to say.. great job

XD...
4 the dragonhearted girl chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
I love it! I love that its repetitive but never boring, this is my favourite part..

I am perfectly willing to acknowledge

That missing you won't help

It will not bring you back to me

Or the happiness I felt
Evilives chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Aww that was sad. The feeling of loss is so strong here.
Typhoid Mary chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
I really enjoyed the structure and repeated use of the first line in every stanza. It builds and by the end I'm not sure if the person being spoken to is dead or just gone, which I liked. Very nice.
YasuRan chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Good structure. I like how it builds on the small physical observances before transcending into the emotional. It wasn't too angsty either, more like despondent. Well done.