Reviews for Experimentation |
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![]() ![]() Aww I like it . I didn't understand why it was turned into a game though when things were pretty obvious on how it's going to be and the need to hide this from each other. Also why was she in denial regarding her feelings towards Liam? Was it because she was afraid to get hurt by her previous relationship? I guess that's understandable. I found Layla to be far more interesting character, sort of even tsundere than Michelle even though she is tagged as smart, intelligent and all that. Nothing apart from her feelings towards Brad and the way she's ready to give up on them for the sake of keeping the friendship between them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was adorable! Thanks for posting this story. I'll add this to my community. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this! the two girls' characters r quite nicely separated. n i like the process of liam wooing layla |
![]() ![]() I am becoming a fan of ONE-SHOTS like this one. LOVE IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwwws this was good! but short :( hahaha I wish it were longer, oh wells but this was a good story:) -pandakim:) |
![]() ![]() That was LONG! But I loved it! D I'm in love with Liam (a wee bit because of a TV Show) ;) I liked the main idea a lot. Keep writing awesomely! And check out my story too. Read and Review with any suggestions and advice! :D out-of-the-way |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god. They are all absolutely adorable (except for Mike, of course). I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT. I just have to say that I was kind of confused because the setting would change abruptly... I suggest that you... you know, put in an extra space or a line or anything that signifies that the settings had changed. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome one-shot. i wish there were more of it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw that was so sweet. I could easily see this turn into a very nice rom-com movie! The characters were versatile and interesting (my favorite was Liam, no surprise there) and the storyline was fast paced, but not too fast to be unnatural. The end was touching and sweet too. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awe! This is soo freakin' adorable! I loved your characters and just how genuine your writing style is. Thanks for posting :) |