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![]() ![]() I love this story but i really disppointed by not finding the next chapter : ) please update quickly. |
![]() ![]() I am able to read it! And I love it! I am so excited to see how the meeting goes with her boyfriend and husband, can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter, but it will not let me read Chapter 5, which I SO WANNA READ! Please post soon, I will try to read chapter 5 when it will let me :)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ethan has one week to make it happen. He had better pull out all of the stops. I'm looking forward to reading more. If I were to give any advice, it would have been to develop the relationship between Mari and Simon a little more; at least show the reader how the protagonist truly feels about the relationship (i.e. How solid is it? Is she happy or is she just settling? Does he thrill her at all?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am officially addicted, and I need more, soon! |
![]() ![]() I really like your story its really cute, I just wish the chapters would be longer:) |
![]() ![]() Well, the plot is very…interesting. I like it. I wish I could subscribe to it, but something's up and I can't log in. :( Anyway, please update soon. I'll check on it and subscribe as soon as possible. :) -Amy Stardust |
![]() ![]() awesome update more please |
![]() ![]() AGGHH! this story is awesome and cute it left me blushing |
![]() ![]() It will not let me log on but for your information, Soonafter100 is my profile name...I loved this do far and I hope you can post soon! Since it won't let me log on can you PLEASE, PLEASE PM me when the next chapter comes out PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, the legal premise is completely false but the story still sounds interesting. I am interested in reading where you will take this story from here. If she is twenty-three then he is twenty, correct? Will he succeed in winning her heart? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting. keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very interesting and cute idea! I am glad to have found the story. |