|Reviews for I Will Not Cry|
| littleducklinglove chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
"Are you Jewish?"
"No I'm agnostic."
"You don't want to know."
I laugh. the world's people can be such bitches sometimes right? I'm assuming you didn't go back and edit this, and just let raw anger take control when i say it needs a little work though. the first paragraph and the begging and end of the second are great, but the core of the point your making in the second paragraph form 'which is why' to 'i won't cry' just kind of gets lost. I understand the examples, but it feels like they need to be more separated. you have to make it clear to this person because they're so damn stupid right? so there's my advice to you. use it well. -ducky
| ncbx chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
it's sad and amazing. and it's REALLY sad that I know who this is directed towards, who got the surgery, and all that other stuff. You are doing awesome work with all your poems and stories. I feel like a proud mother. Not that I "led you in the right direction" or anything.