|Reviews for Find Me|
| donfearsnothing chapter 64 . 12/3/2012
I am so relieved that you've decided to continue with this story, in fact I just spent the day re-reading the entire story. Truly one of my absolute favourites. I hope there's another update coming soon.
| AKAAKAAKA chapter 64 . 12/2/2012
Hahaha! I did it! I finally caught up to the latest chapter! (Forgive me assignments...)
When I saw this, I expected something sexy and more...modern teen-ish.(Based on what I read these days in FP. Not that it's bad or anything.) But when i read this...wow.
Where to begin...
In the first 20 chapters or so it was very poetic. I felt like images flitted through my mind and I could see it like I was reading a manga. The feel was manga-ish, and I swear the coffee scene felt like a minimalistic style manga page. It was beautiful, and I found myself pressing the next, wanting to see the journey between these two.
Juni is an interesting character, and I find it adorable when I read the interludes, because he really loves her that much.
Amelia, well, I'm enamored with her. Her insecurities and her desires are fun to read.
Liz. Well this is where it surprised me. Liz is a very North American Character. Sexually Liberated, her age is not a barrier, and she does things without regret. Because of that, the form of the story changes and I could see the brunch scenes like a movie. It was interesting every time I read it.
The story is beautiful.
The story is sweet.
The story is touching.
I enjoy this story so much, and I feel like writing again. I have this urge to pick up the pen, or type on the keys, just so I could craft a story again. Sounds cheesy I know, but I love this story.
I hope you have three things before the end:
a.) Confrontation with Nelea
b.) The meeting with Juni's parents.
The last one, I hope is a happy ending. I love these two that I worry about them. I want them to last for a long long long time, because it feels...precious for them.
I like your other stories, and I love the ideas of second chances and redemption, and thus, I am now a fan.
| Raquel chapter 64 . 12/2/2012
I can count on one hand the best stories I've EVER read online and this is one of them. I am so glad you're back! I've missed it so.
| ricecooker2000 chapter 16 . 12/2/2012
Haha I've always wanted to read that book, ever since I saw the movie and decided there was something missing (prolly needed more explanations of the girl's internal thoughts as the affair went on...).
| ricecooker2000 chapter 10 . 12/2/2012
After flipping thru so much teenage drama and immature writing, this was absolutely refreshing to come across. The simple, but poignant descriptions from the start made me think this is a bit more personal than just a story... and now I think the AN proves it?
Anyways, just letting you know this is pretty cool. I loved the minimal descriptions, and even if the heroine seems a bit wimpy for my usual taste, I think a lot of us gals can identify with her insecurities and I really admire how you got me to sympathize. I don't know if I can finish it in one go (60 chaps?!) but I've been enjoying it so far! :D
| nessieandthedog chapter 64 . 12/1/2012
Thank you. They are at peace and I am content. I am so happy for them. Thank you for responding. Wasn't expecting it to be perfectly honest. Yay!
| nessieandthedog chapter 63 . 12/1/2012
I am still so in love with this story and the characters that I am still checking, making sure that you haven't updated whilst I wasn't looking. It never is updated though, and that makes my heart sad. It's such a wonderful ball of fluff that I love enveloping myself in every now and again, I just wish it had an ending, it feels so unfinished. Still waiting though...
| Pream chapter 63 . 9/18/2011
Wow! Almost all of your characters are hilarious :D
| Susan Holt chapter 63 . 8/26/2011
I love your story... I don't know if it sounds weird, but I also liek the fact that there's an age difference and this time it's the girl who's older! Kudos for that!
I'm sorry you feel the burn out! I know how difficult it can be! :( Take your time though and relax!
I hope this wasn't your last chapter though. I'd like to see what happens to the loving couple! :)
| Orifiel M. Blancarte chapter 63 . 7/29/2011
Nice job on this! And I can definitely relate to burnout...it's worse than writer's block, I'll tell you that :)
| OnceUponaStory chapter 63 . 7/26/2011
I miss this story...Just thought I'd let you know. I hope you are doing well!
| wakeyourdreamz chapter 63 . 7/23/2011
WHAT? Was that the end?
Cause...like, sorry dude, but cruddy ending!
You're a really good writer, I don't know why people are ragging on you and stuff, I've enjoyed your story. It's in a strange tense, but it's different.
I love the overall idea of it and I love how you've explained everything, though you didn't put much thought into it and it was just on a whim, you could've fooled me.
I also think that this is craaaazy amount of chapters. I mean, I can understand why you'd need all this stuff, it's all very important but I think you need to look at working to incorporate them all together to shorten the overall story. The beginning chapters weren't too long at all, I think up until about Ch 30-40. From there, they started to get longer and that was great! But the changing lengths in chapters is kind of annoying, so maybe that's something to look at/think about.
I loooove Juni. His name is kind of awkward cause it reminds of Juni from SpyKids but it's really cute, I just wish I could conjure up a sweet, hot looking guy with silver in my head - totally impossible.
But, I loved the story...not the ending...if that's what it is. There was no resolution.
And if it's not the end, I think you should change it from the 'Complete' list and update soon.
| chewychester chapter 63 . 7/7/2011
Awww, Mere Nova, you are welcome. :D GReat job of it
| Caitie Manda chapter 63 . 7/6/2011
S-W-E-E-T. I liked it. It was pretty funny to read. I mean, wouldn't it make you laugh to see your teacher looking this way and that while texting? Just like students do in class? AND, she's in a room all by herself! The funniest part though, was when the principal came in. HAHA! "Busted." LOL XD
Picture update: sadly, I have been so busy with holidays and other plans that I haven't had time to start on it...and tomorrow I'll be heading out of town, so I will have to put it off for another 4 days! But I will be working on it soon. I can only hope, at least...
Until next chapter!
| WahyaKoda chapter 29 . 7/5/2011
I just started reading this story yesterday and I can't stop. It's really good! You add the perfect amount of character to Amelia and Juni- make them real and relatable. You don't put in the perfect amount of details in the scenery and surrounding characters to add depth but not bore the reader.
Just wanted to say congrats.
p.s. Just a friendly tip from a fellow writer. You might want to go back and edit or get a beta- there are a few places so far where grammar is a little off this is distracting to a reader.