Reviews for Find Me
crazy girl 1901 chapter 58 . 6/23/2011
whoa! wait but it's not true right? i mean the pictures have to be old right? lol well of course. becuase i really don't think juni would do that to her. gosh tho henry is such a butt face! please update soon because i'm dying to see what happens next! :)
crazy girl 1901 chapter 57 . 6/23/2011
i like this well other than henry! thats ok it took a little while to update lol at first i thought maybe something super bad had happen or you weren't going to write the story anymore.
chewychester chapter 58 . 6/23/2011
So what are these pictures? IS he a porn star? Lucky girl. heehee Does he post on the internet? She knows he has been with other women, so what? I'm not upset yet.
theslykit chapter 58 . 6/23/2011
i wasn't exactly sure what to expect when i clicked on the story...and to be quite honest the short chapters didn't thrill me very much...after all, as we all know those kinds of stories are never any good...but you've proved me wrong and i have indeed quite enjoyed this and can't wait for the next update! it's also nice to find an author who can impart the japanese culture a bit more accurately than most so for that i congratulate you!

otsukare mere nova-san! :)
Caitie Manda chapter 57 . 6/22/2011
That was a great chapter. Sorry I didn't review sooner. I've been extremely busy, and I haven't been in the mood myself to read or write. I liked it a lot. Zee was hilarious. XD. "You've probably got her yodeling all the time." LOL. I hope you'll be feeling better soon. :)

With Love,

Caitlyn
Clarissa Rose chapter 57 . 6/22/2011
It's official. I don't need a boyfriend or husband or whatever. I have fallen in love with Juni! This story and the writing and the characters are all terrific! I Have done nothing but read this for the last two days and now I'm hooked so I do hope you put more out soon. I loved, love, loved it!
chewychester chapter 57 . 6/22/2011
What a cliff hanger ending! I've been dying to know Juni's secretive past, even if it is probably wrong from Henry, rumors usually have a grain of truth. Or maybe he'll lie to try and get her back? Oh you are eveil, EVIl. Now, don't you start any more heart tugging stories until you put this one to bed! I mean finished. :)
noriepie chapter 57 . 6/22/2011
Sweet. I the Henry for tryin to ruin things. There are hints of some bad things in Juni's past but he'll tell her eventually, but Henry just wants to interfere.
chewychester chapter 56 . 6/19/2011
Squee! I love fan girls. Yeah, glass breaks and dogs run for cover, but I love the image of Juni floating in a dream balloon with flowers. I hope writing this cheered you up as well
Candy-necklace31 chapter 56 . 6/18/2011
hey dont worry about what other people say... well except me cause i think this story is AMAZING! and that this story flows so easily its awesome (cue munchkin laugh) tehehe
Dreamer-MRAF chapter 56 . 6/18/2011
I read the first 30-or so chapters of your story in one go, and have been following avidly ever since. It caught my attention immediately, your style is different and new, and your characters seem realistic and (in Juni's case) utterly lovable.

I read some of your previous reviews... and I can sort of see where your critics are coming from, in Juni's case. But at the same time, you've done a great job of making him NOT perfect. He is flawed, and we see that, in how hard he works to control himself around her, and how he reacts to her in an all too human way.

And besides, the point of fiction is to take us to a place outside our world. And a world where a man like him exists is one I wouldn't mind being in.

Don't lose your real reason for writing. If it is no longer an absolute pleasure to do so, then we as readers are not giving you the credit you deserve. You're doing a wonderful job, and letting the characters...speak to you, as you do, is turning out to be a rather sensational story.

-Dreamer
noriepie chapter 56 . 6/18/2011
Ha! That was sweet! I LOVE it and it was definitely lighthearted and you're really good because I can totally see your story written in manga style. It was that GOOD. I can see the daisies floating and the descriptions you wrote and I enjoyed it.

Was wondering about what you said in author's note. Just enjoy the story and I think people nitpicking or give suggestions because you've manage to make them care about the story too, which is a great thing! But I hope you feel better soon :) and everyone has these moments of feeling off and stressed. Hope things work out for you.

Sorry haven't been reviewing as much because writing on the phone is pretty messy for me. BUT, in response to your pm about my suggestion for lengthening your chapters, thanks for explaining your reasons and I totally understand. I really appreciate your quick updates. ;)

Feel better! *smiles*
OnceUponaStory chapter 56 . 6/18/2011
I loved this chapter so much! It reminds of "You're Beautiful" ( a korean drama about a girl who joins a boys band under the guise of being a boy, so that she can help her identical twin brother. She falls in love with the main singer, and it is my favorite korean drama. Here is the link it's guaranteed to make you smile korean-drama/youre-beautiful). It's kind of funny to me how the American guys are always so charming, and then in oriental dramas they're such jerks at the beginning...but we adore them by the end. Makes me happy. But anyway, I loved the feel of this chapter and it made me smile. I hope you have a great weekend.
crazy girl 1901 chapter 55 . 6/17/2011
i like this chapter, it was cute and simple. but try not to be so stressed and i know its easier said then done but still. don't be stressed about your writing it's good and i like it. ya we all have those days where things are just blech , but it'll be ok. please update soon!
Caitie Manda chapter 55 . 6/16/2011
This chapter was great! I loved the details of the festival. I thought that it was sort of silly for Amelia to be worried in the least about Juni standing her up, but I probably would've done the same thing. I think that the girls in her class are totally gonna grill her about Juni. And he was TOTALLY going for it! He just loves getting that woman flustered, doesn't he...? Don't worry. You did a good job. :)

I'm sorry to hear that you haven't been feeling well lately. Truth is, I haven't been either. My own writing has been off lately...but at least I finally got something up on this website worth reading. I won't get into it, though, because this review is about YOU, not me. I hope that you start feeling better soon. I know that when you're feeling low or sick, your writing suffers too. Get well soon! :)

With Love,

Caitlyn
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