Reviews for The Fall of Leonard Vanderbilt
Spiral Architect chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Forgot to review this when I read it, lol.

I must say, I'd like to see this expanded. I wanna know what happens next...
Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Ehehehehe. Sudden death. :D I like it! And I wasn't expecting the other person in the picture to be portrayed as a boy, so that was unexpected.

This would be great as a longer story.
xrolipolix chapter 1 . 5/9/2011

Haha! I just plain enjoyed reading this. :D Is this a oneshot? It'd be a shame! I actually, seriously enjoyed this! I want to know more about the gem, where it came from, why it affected them so much... and what damage it can do. I know this sounds cheesy, but, please, continue! :D
Bethie M. W chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
It feels strange to say something violent was wonderful, but this was wonderful! :) Perfect for the image! I'm so glad you wrote something, because I really wanted that picture to have a story but have had absolutely zero energy and time to write my own. Plus, I had no ideas. :P

But this was great! I really enjoyed it and like how you stuck with the suggested twisted fairy tale theme. It looked like a definite challenge, and you pulled it off quite nicely. :)