Angela is such a little pest. I hope they get her to her father soon and start with training and go on adventures.

Hope to read more soon.

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Your paragraphs are all disjointed, it's hard to read. I think FP messed up your document

This is such an amazing story! :). It really made me happy when I read it. Considering it hasn't been updated in over five years, I'm just going to call this the last chapter...:P It's a good ending anyway :).

Some parts reminding me of other fantasies I've read (like some Mercedes Lackey, my favourite author), and that was great. Lovely story, and fantastic job!

~AftG, Maggie

great story!

Hi! I know this story's been finished (or has gone non-updated, at least) for years, but I thought you'd like to know that it still has one fan...a fan who just spent about a half-hour using various search keywords trying to find it. Now that I have, I'm never letting it go! Never!

This seemed like the end? This has to be one of the best stories i have ever read. ever. Its was so amazing that it needed two 'evers'. I was laughing my ass off when Patrik and Drinn were getting high. And I'm very happy that Eden is still around. I was a bit upset when he 'died'. Glad he and Patrik seem to be all 'blushy' around each other too. Your note said you'd continue it, its been 5 years, will you be updating or is this the end? (still a good ending in my opinion, though an ending without Zoe and Micheal not 'doing the deed' makes me sad...)

aw~ Eden...

...this is one of the best stories EVER written...EVER...

please don't tell me you have given up on this story. I really really really want to see how it ends. [

Cute story. Some moments were really precious (like the one from the last chapter with "But... I've just sworn off sex"). I'm adding it to my fav stories list.

Ah, this story is absolutely amazing! I just finished reading it in one sitting. _ You have a remarkable gift for storytelling!

I really enjoyed this story, and I've been waiting for your next update for quite a while. Mostly, I'm just wondering if you are going to finish this. You are a great writer, and you do a wonderful job of capturing the readers heart. I'd love to see this story finished, it would be such a shame to see it abandoned here.

Wow, this is an awesome story! I just kept reading and couldn't stop. I loved the characters and the plot. You did have some spelling and capitalization errors but nothing too major. Anyways, I hope that you will complete this story one day soon. It seems like you only need one more chapter or so in order for it to be finished. It would be a shame to leave the story like this when it's so close to being done.

Wow, this story is so good. I’m having a blast reading it and can’t wait to read what happens next. (I envy your Bata-readers. :)

I sat down and started reading and didn’t get up until I was done. Hey if you end up doing a part two I’d love to find out more about Patrik and Eden. :)

Anyway I just wanted to tell you it’s a excellent story. Keep it up, because I’m kind of addicted now and it would be very, very cruel for you to cut me off of my reading drugs. :)