Reviews for Son of the East Wind
Val Mora chapter 4 . 3/31/2003
More Misty-bits: referring to it as mage gift (although Lackey says Mage-Gift); the horse breed is similar in circumstance to Shin'a'in-bred horses.

Hmm... well, I like, even though you've obviously been heavily influenced by at least the Oathbound trilogy, if not the others. No shame; everyone loves Misty!

Good work; I really like this, especially how it's not copied off Lackey, even though you've borrowed some of her concepts and words.
Val Mora chapter 3 . 3/31/2003
You've read Mercedes Lackey's books, especially the ones with the Tayledras. It sticks out like a sore thumb - white hair from the roots out, because he's a mage, and blue eyes for the same reason? NOT recommended if you're looking to keep out of a legal suit.

Then your use of the word shield-mate (which, by the way, you misspelled) - another Lackey term. My suggestion would be to change it, otherwise you'll be kicking yourself in a few months.

You also forgot to capitalize Patrik, as in Micheal's late shield-mate.

Other than that, this is absolutely gorgeous, and I'm looking forward to reading more.
CreativeConnections chapter 1 . 3/21/2003
Hey i love the story so far! continue!
Tamashii no Kurayami chapter 12 . 2/16/2003
I LOVE this story. Love. Love. Love.

*rants on and on with stuff you don't want to know*

Excuse , I added this to my favorite stories list and I hope you write the next chapter soon. It's not fair this only has 20-so reviews ;_; I HATE it when those stories with wierd, random humor have 100 and the really witty, descriptive ones don't. ~_~

Keep it up!
Lami chapter 12 . 2/13/2003
oh, wow, i missed college today because i couldn't stop reading this! i can't wait for more. it's very captivating, i'm not just saying that the praise is well amd tryly deserved, you should consider getting this published. :)

Random Reviewer chapter 12 . 1/14/2003
I very much like your story! You have fleshed out characters and a good plot that I can already see developing. The readers already love Zoe and Micheal by chapter 3, and the inteaction between them is great. The only part of this story that needs some improvement is Chapter twelve: all the character names get pretty confusing. Other than that, this story is very, very good, and I hop you continue to add more chapters.
Woman of the Dunedain chapter 12 . 8/12/2002
Yea-haw, girl! *Battles off the ravenous pop0ups*

This is great! It's not often that one can find a decent original fic on this site (thus their lack of appeal.) But yours is really well written, and I like the characters alot! Please post the next chapter soon. I will be watching for it on my favorites list.
KaiXiang chapter 12 . 8/5/2002
this is so good! and so sweet! ahh ya have ta write the next chapter! XD I love the characters and the story line is awsome! keep it up!
Adam chapter 12 . 6/12/2002

This is a great story. I hope that you continue to work on it more.
SkySong chapter 11 . 10/11/2001
Waaaiiii! _ I love it! Love it love it love it *is promptly wacked by her chara's* Err, yea. I'm waiting for the next chaper. _
Levittion chapter 1 . 10/11/2001
Good very good. We what more keep them coming.

Lady Bisenshi chapter 11 . 7/20/2001
Woah! Pretty good, adn way better than anything I could do. Well ca't wait for the next part. Got to go. BYE-BYE!
Gokou-chan chapter 11 . 7/19/2001
_ More! You can't stop there! It's killing me... argh! *bangs head on wall* O.o *watches computer screen like vulture* heh heh, write! *wails*
Gokou-chan chapter 3 . 7/19/2001
O.o you really out did yourself this time! Sugoi! Sugoi desu! Please keep writing, I just love your work!
Yaoi fan on a Sugar High chapter 11 . 7/16/2001
Love it. Write more. Soon.
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