Reviews for Cat and Mouse
invisibleXangel chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
love the contrast between the characters. minnie is so different from jasper. that makes them an amazing pair.

awesome oneshot. :D
xinnie chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Oh god. That was an awesome oneshot. Trust me, I'm actually still smiling right now :)

To be honest, Jasper kinda freaked me out too... a little. But then my heart melted when he kissed Minnie (nancy) :)

Basically, one comment.

0bsethed1 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Huh I'm those type of persons who doesn't believe anything like this can happen but wow I may be wrong after all _. I loved it and it was written good. Mouse and Cat...I really like it D.

Hmm Mouse reference things well I noticed a few


's innocent and unharming?

she's shy and almsot never speaks

does this count?She's wearing a disney shirt?I want to guess minnie mouse

5-6. ?
Kaleidoscope World chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
I LOVE IT! Can you please continue it?
Ana3498 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
AW! That was so sweet! I would love for you to continue the story but the ending was so perfect that I don't think you need to. Keep writing!
Spha098 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
I love it. It's so romantic!
SecretAgent99 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Oh my goodness! This was so adorable and funny! I loved it! Great job! :D
Marjulie chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Aw, to cute :) I really wished you wrote a story about Jasper and Minnie. Oh well, I hope you do though
Readers12 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
nice i like it and im quite picky too but this kinda good to bad it was only one chapter
Midnight113 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Very cute, I love how you went about writing this particular concept. Jasper is pretty scary in a hot and scary way, lol. Well done.
CrazyCowgirl101 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Aww! Really good! Love the imagery! I wish there was more!
ILAKOM chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
I liked it a lot! Nancy and Jasper make such a great couple! :)
T-TI-O chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
awesome. pure awesomeness...
Myst C chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Wow, this was amazing! :)

I just don't like, i love.

It was so cute, :3

Did he like her for awhile now, or just begin his interest in her?

Well this was awesome, and I love Jasper's name, and his outfit, and all of him! XD

The description of him was hot! totally the type I love.

Great writing too!

leavesfallingup chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
A very cute story, made better by the fact that Tricia lost face; not to mention the fact that she wouldn't dare do anything to Nancy now that Jasper is there to protect her.
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