Reviews for Cat and Mouse
Drops of Jewpiter chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
awesome beginning. the summary really drew me in, and i can't wait to read more!
purple.y-goodness chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Aw! It's so cute!
Noreia chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
This was such a cute story and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I almost wish it was a longer story because I would love to see more interaction between the characters and how their relationship develops because they are so different. But I thought it was an awesome and definitely entertaining one-shot.
Kiveda chapter 1 . 5/9/2011

nice...sounds more like a chapter of a book than a one shot
Lollipop08 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
LOVED IT!... I made smile and giggle, def well writen
mooniemex chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
I love this, it makes me want to jump up, and down, and giggle...

hugs and smiley faces

GoneAway-MightNotBeReturning chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Love this! What else can I say? Awesome - believable - characters and funny cat and mouse (etc. etc.) references.
Rainel Krey chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Haha, I liked this, this is really cute!

There were a few mistakes though but none that was too distracting.

I liked the story itself, it was really too adorable! It's a great one-shot and I enjoyed how you kept the whole cat and mouse thing going on throughout the whole story. It's one of those stories that have been used before but can be rewritten in so many ways to make it original, and you did just that! I really liked it, one of the 'funnest' stories I've read haha!

Your descriptions were really good too, they aren't too long but just enough to give an image.

The characters are enjoyable as well. They're someone you'll believe that you really can or will meet in real life.

Keep on writing, I'll look forward to more of your stuff!
SquakyTheDuck chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
This was so flipping adorable! I like the description of both Nancy and Jasper. Also, I love how Tricia's reason for taking her folder is pms. Awesome one shot! Keep writing!
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