Reviews for The Ride
EC18 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
XD I will favorite this one! :) Excellent poem! :)
Time To Change chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
You've set up the piece really nicely and I like how being brought down is movement in a sense and therefore related to the ride.
Channitut chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Nice, I liked the 'close/open eyes' part the most.
Archia chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
I like the repetition and opposites in the second stanza. I like the effect it gave (to me at least). I enjoyed the meaning in this, it's a helpful one.