Reviews for sugar cube
october lies chapter 2 . 5/10/2011
there are so many things i adore in this, especially your portrayal of college nights (without putting emphasis on drug use) already unlike most of the writing on here.

"My pores twitched, the Adderall working its way across the surface, goosebumps everywhere"

" I sparked the bowl and proceeded to cash it out in-between clicks of the mouse and life decisions for the Parkine family."

& "dilating my eyes and gripping my nerves."

they paint such clear pictures without any awkward or long descriptions. i can't wait for more.
october lies chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
i'm in love with this already. i'm glad to see that you're writing a short story. "as it swerved around the highway's hip" - i love the imagery of that line. i can't wait to see more of hue, especially.