|Reviews for In Case of Emergencies|
| balloonfista chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
AWWW this was SHOOO CUTE! Loved it, loved it, loved it. Okay I have so many things I want to say so *TAKE A DEEP BREATH LIKE THEY LEARNT IN THAT CLASS* and start:
Well, I'd say heroine, but I didn't peg you to be the type swooned by Twilight references - This line made me roll with laughter! HAHAHA!
I loved the role reversal. I'm totally gaga over stories where the girl is like the pursuer and the 'dominating' one, so to speak (This may be because I'm a dominatrix but let's not go there :P)
And the end was so, so cute and awesome! I totally loved the way he asked her out - and the breathing barrier thing - EPICNESS! :)
Just two things:
I think it should be 'Breathe. breathe' instead of 'breath. breath'. 'Breath' is a noun whereas 'breathe' is the verb.
ALso, I think FP cut out what you were trying to post here.
"Her eyebrows were furrowed slightly in concentration and he grinned. Before he could stop himself, he let out a ."
That is all :)
| Preposterous chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
I love this oneshot! It's lighthearted and funny.
| SwimmingThroughExistance chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
that was so cheesy
1 but then again, that why i love it! good writing, write more
| caitly chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
This is so wonderfully cute
| Vanilla Chocola chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Short and sweet. :3