Reviews for Manners
laurenmlbc chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Very good job with this...especially building up the suspense and intrigue! Definitely looking forward to seeing where you are going to go with this!
Roulon du Toit chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Wow.

I really enjoyed that one. Clear and sharp, very much alive!

Well done!
FallingIntoSections chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Sounds like a rough time. :/

I'm interested, your writing style is fascinating.
Neuravinci chapter 2 . 7/19/2011
Man this was quite interesting. i wouldn't say it's the best I've read, but it's still not bad. Could be developed a bit more, perhaps add a more emotional/psychological/physiological component to really amp up the intensity. :)
Neuravinci chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Very good beginning indeed. I remember this no-sname-b**** once bumping into me, on purpose, in the mall, for no apparent reason. I can commisserate with Zannah indeed. Which, hmm, reminds me, Zannah reminds me of Zanax, or whatever, I think it's an antidepressant-Any conscious connection there on you rpart?
CrimsonTears57 chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
I really like this and how it's like the main character is talking to me. It's fun to read. Please update soon!
Revenge Is Bliss chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
It's kind of obvious where this is going to go, but it's interesting so far. It's very well written and I like the analogies and details. Update soon!
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