Reviews for Two Worlds
Burnt Bread chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Two Worlds - the title is interesting. I like the sense of acceptance from the main character I get when I read this piece. You've created a character that has an understanding of the world and possibilities after his death. Referring to the man as 'My killer' as he begins to make his way up in the world creates a lovely sense of displacement.

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Shadowgal98 chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
Woah, that was awesome. -There is no more to say-
Shero chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
I was totally speechless after I read this. Wow. The idea is masterfully portrayed, and I love the way you make blunt, one sentence references to the daughter. This is really an incredible study on the human imagination and reasoning ability. I really really really like it!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
My god, that was really just...amazing. You've crafted a masterpiece.
Retsof chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
Wow... that's really all I can say...
Homura Kitsune chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
Excellent story-telling. Great ending.

Usually I don't like writing told in future tense, but here you've done it well. The dynamic between the killer and the narrator is wonderful even though it's only told in a fraction of a second in the narrator's mind.

I like the unique style, too. Rarely do I see a story told that takes place entirely inside someone's head. Even rarer is when it's done well.