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Reviews for
The Thirteenth Birthday
Lord Mandalore
chapter 1 .
5/12/2011
I imagined everything looking like Aperture Science made it.
Good story!
Vam
chapter 1 .
5/12/2011
Oh wow . . . this is like a Bradbury short story.
Great job.