Reviews for The Deck of Hearts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Umm Victor seems interesting, and you made one mistake, when Tori left you said the boss said, "Hey, her shift doesn't end until two!"... You said Tori's boss thinks she is a boy, and yet when her boss talked it said "her" get what I mean, just letting you know...Great Chapter, it was so funny here and there. Can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am loving this more and more everyday! Please post again very soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so excited to see who going to lose the bet first! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looks good. Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wanna bet, but I rather have the next chapter more! Hehe-haha, can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhh la la what a great bet to make :)) I like where this is going and I can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually do love him being a Jerk...Wonderful chapter, can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you!:) Keep on writing! X Humanie |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it, and I am so excited, you wanna know why...CAUSE i am so excited for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute, but could you try making a difference between talking and thinking, that would make it a lot easier to read. Keep on writing! X Humanie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me LOVE IT and I hope you post soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this, please update soon! |
![]() ![]() U MadeMyLifeComplete is ma real name on this site but i cant log on so please send me a message please cause I LOVE YOUR STORY SO SO SO MUCH ! |
![]() ![]() It will not let me log on but for your information, Soonafter100 is my profile name...I really like this please update soon! And if you can, PLEASE PM when the next chapter is out, because I could not subscribe to this due to me not being able to log in, so PLEASE! Thanks! |