Reviews for The Deck of Hearts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So, dude I found this story yesterday and started reading it and then I got addicted... like i literally stayed up til three reading until chapter 42. I read the rest tonight in like an hour and a half lol and now I have to wait? Ughhhh lol LOVE this story, btw! It's on my favorits and soon to be on my Alerts because it is just THAT AWESOME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! It's great! sorta cliche though :D But I love cliche stories. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehe that cracks me up the part where nicole pulled out derek's arm and the 2 adults scream i can imagine that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the fake arm excuse. It was hilarious! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am wanting his dad to like her and for he to be about about her being with his son! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this! please keep writing! |
![]() ![]() This story is seriously starting to get boring u need to make longer chapters n wrap it up. It began good but now not so interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter hehe though this might cause problems for the two if she finds that they are living together :( well hope to find out soon thanks for updating so quickly it really is great |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohhh myyyy goshhh! you have GOT to write more soon! i am dying to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome as always! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good keep on writing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OHHH MYYYY GOSHHHH I LOVE THIS STORY! I AM HOOKED! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter though its sad how his dad doesn't like them together and that they have to prove there love so anyhow see you soon then :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAHAAHAH, this was pretty funny :D Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() heheheh i love the alternative version...and i love this chapter too! :) |