|Reviews for save your breath|
| recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
i like the poetry feeling it had to it. really lyrical and interestingly put.
| Pinkbunnysrbeast chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
This story is... an atrocity! No regard for punctuation, and it's too short. If you read the guidelines, it says no one or two liners. This 'story' has FOUR lines. Which considers it as a one or two liner. And considering it's a literary website but you don't use proper punctuation OR capitalization... then it's beggining to be a bit of a problem, right? If you continue, which I hope you do, because it was good, then regard the limit of words in a story, capitalization, and puntuation. Please.
| Non.graceful chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
( the name above is my fiction press account )
You know this story has some sass in it! I love it!
Maybe you could have put it into the sane format as a poem but who cares! It's awesome!
Change five minutes into five seconds, show how weak this male is :)