|Reviews for Once My Home|
| Aanaleigh chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
Sorry I took so long to do this. School's be horrible lately.
I really like this. At first I didn't really understand what was going on, but by the time I reached the end, I did. You did very well on tying it all together.
No errors as far as I could see, and I doubt that there were to begin with.
Keep writing Alexis, you're amazing at it.
| oolongnoodles chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
This is great! ;) Favorited, though I did notice some punctuation mistakes.
| Midnight Epitome chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
FP won't let me give a signed review. /
You said it's an LA story? You have to let me know what score the teacher gave you. It was short, but it's perfect that way. No punctuation errors [yes, I just /have/ to notice punctuation first], and, as far as I can see, no spelling and grammatical errors, too.