Reviews for Home Trained For You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have read only the first chapter of Home Trained for You. But, the writing is very good, and there is enough exposition to offset the fact that it is told in first person. First person fiction can quickly get spoiled by sentence after sentence beginning with "I". This story avoids that, making it very readable and indicative of a skilled storyteller. I am not gay. I am submissive, however. But, when I was younger, I did have a few homosexual experiences. So, although this story doesn't excite me sexually, I can see where a submissive gay who enjoys reading about rougher sex would find himself excited. |
![]() ![]() Fucking stunning |
![]() ![]() Loved the story! I want too be kidnapped and loved like that |
![]() ![]() I love and hate this story. Thanks for sharing! Will there be an epilogue? What happened with him and Skyler? Thanks. Tracy Can't remember my login feel free to email me |
![]() ![]() I first read this story when I was in the relationship with my ex. I just found it again. Jeffery and his questions are just like my ex's brother and his questions. My ex was never physical with me, but relating so strongly to the rest of the shit that Mark is going through... Holy fuck. My ex is still alive tho. And I have to see him twice a week for changeovers with our son. It makes me so sick. This story is so incredibly well written, realistic and relatable on so many levels. Thank you for writing it |
![]() ![]() Gross. Fags. |
![]() ![]() This is the best story of this type I have ever read. It’s a great story. |
![]() ![]() You need to bring Joey back The last chapter just had me mourning |
![]() ![]() The story was beautiful... and at some point I started liking Joey and that says only one thing... Your story captured me... it was just like I too started believing in Joey the way Mark had. Your writing is so gripping and realistic that I was just thrown by the ending... best of luck and I really wish you to read more of your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait, I was wondering, is this fiction inspired by When Jeff Comes Home? Because Jeff was 16 when he was kidnapped. ... or maybe it's just me. Good work, tho! Love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is what I call Porn With Plot. Ugh, I really love this. |
![]() ![]() Hi! AThis fic is really good, if you ever planning to published it (sure you have to repaired here and there for few mistakes) please let us know! |
![]() ![]() Please make a sequel when joey comes back please |
![]() ![]() me ship joey and mike ‡ |
![]() ![]() I WUVED THIS! THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS BECAUSE I JUST NEEDED TO READ SOMETHING THAT WUZ INTERESTING AND AMAZING †–† ps MAKE MORE STORIES PLZ...- |