Reviews for Walk away
Icestormize chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
This one is good. However, there could be more 'showing' in the words rather than 'telling'. I mean that you're not letting me infer about anything. I'm just seeing the words there.

Of course, I'm not one to review about that, since I don't 'show' much... haha...

I like your writing style. It is quite different from many poets and it's nice... :)
bloodandroses16 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Yes, you will find that someone. Someday, somewhere, somehow. (Ha. I just kinda plagiarised myself) But seiously, don't give up.