Love!

I think Jared's comment about Lydia having everything memorized could have been worded better, but it's all right. You left off the last d in "dad," too. Other than that, this was a good chapter.

This chapter was cute. I think the part of the chapter after Lorenzo appeared, when they were talking about their relationship, could have been longer, but that's only my opinion.

The questions were a nice touch. They led up to the kiss rather well. This was a good chapter.

That was a nice not-so-cliche ending. I think you write that well. The awkwardness wasn't overbearing, but it wasn't nonexistent either. This chapter was good.

That is definitely one of the funniest confessions of liking someone, though it wasn't to his face. A couple of missing letters and punctuation marks, but it was a good chapter otherwise.

I caught a small typo, but it's not a big deal. This chapter was really cute.

I know I'm reviewing really late, but I really can't imagine what it would be like to go through an experience like that, to know people in a shooting that horrible... I'm glad we share our faith in God, though!

Lydia isn't being totally oblivious to Lorenzo flirting with her, at the very least. Meeting his family was... entertaining. This chapter was good.

Things are getting a bit more interesting... I didn't see any mistakes in this chapter. Good job!

That was a very strange intervention meeting... I do like that little bit of information about Lydia's reason for not getting into romantic relationships, and, frankly, I kind of agree. I liked this chapter. It was really good.

I love that little story of how Tyler and Lyd met! I didn't see any huge mistakes. This was a good chapter.

You know what's weird? I also like Ben & Jerry (the show), I write, my name is Elizabeth a.k.a Liz, I have a teacher named Mr. Perkins, I'm horrible at ice skating, I live in the U.S. And now I bet you have no idea what I'm talking about...anyways, I love your stories Nacho, and Loan Plus

Lydia's mom's hilarious. I liked the humor in this chapter. Lorenzo was a bit creepy to me, though... This was a good chapter.

There were a few mistakes in this chapter, but not very many. I agree with Gabby and and Lyd that hearing about my future would just cause me to make certain decisions.