Reviews for Loan Plus Interest |
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![]() ![]() OMG! This was so good and incredibly adorable! I loved it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story when so great! ! ! I loved every second of it! I think it might beat Nacho in my favorites of yours. Although I still love that dog XD Anyway, this was amazing, and I'll definitely come back to it when I need to read some fluff! Any chance of a sequel? ;P -Angel Princess 31 |
![]() ![]() I like your story !:P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy fuck I love this story so much and I'm, like, over 2 years late with this review but screw it. This was funny and romantic and sweet and simple divinity because I smiled through most of this and I'm convinced Jared some become a famous psychiatrist...or he's a miracle worker. Either way. Amazing job on this! :) Sincerely, scatter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think Jared's comment about Lydia having everything memorized could have been worded better, but it's all right. You left off the last d in "dad," too. Other than that, this was a good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was cute. I think the part of the chapter after Lorenzo appeared, when they were talking about their relationship, could have been longer, but that's only my opinion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The questions were a nice touch. They led up to the kiss rather well. This was a good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a nice not-so-cliche ending. I think you write that well. The awkwardness wasn't overbearing, but it wasn't nonexistent either. This chapter was good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is definitely one of the funniest confessions of liking someone, though it wasn't to his face. A couple of missing letters and punctuation marks, but it was a good chapter otherwise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I caught a small typo, but it's not a big deal. This chapter was really cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know I'm reviewing really late, but I really can't imagine what it would be like to go through an experience like that, to know people in a shooting that horrible... I'm glad we share our faith in God, though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lydia isn't being totally oblivious to Lorenzo flirting with her, at the very least. Meeting his family was... entertaining. This chapter was good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Things are getting a bit more interesting... I didn't see any mistakes in this chapter. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a very strange intervention meeting... I do like that little bit of information about Lydia's reason for not getting into romantic relationships, and, frankly, I kind of agree. I liked this chapter. It was really good. |