Reviews for Loan Plus Interest
Guest chapter 20 . 1/5/2019
OMG! This was so good and incredibly adorable! I loved it :)
Angel Princess 31 chapter 20 . 8/1/2017
This story when so great! ! ! I loved every second of it! I think it might beat Nacho in my favorites of yours. Although I still love that dog XD

Anyway, this was amazing, and I'll definitely come back to it when I need to read some fluff!

Any chance of a sequel? ;P

-Angel Princess 31
Guest chapter 20 . 6/10/2016
I like your story !:P
scattering the wind chapter 20 . 10/19/2014
Holy fuck I love this story so much and I'm, like, over 2 years late with this review but screw it.
This was funny and romantic and sweet and simple divinity because I smiled through most of this and I'm convinced Jared some become a famous psychiatrist...or he's a miracle worker. Either way.
Amazing job on this! :)
PenguinLover33 chapter 20 . 2/2/2014
Aretice N. Treader chapter 20 . 10/22/2013
I think Jared's comment about Lydia having everything memorized could have been worded better, but it's all right. You left off the last d in "dad," too. Other than that, this was a good chapter.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 19 . 10/22/2013
This chapter was cute. I think the part of the chapter after Lorenzo appeared, when they were talking about their relationship, could have been longer, but that's only my opinion.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 18 . 10/22/2013
The questions were a nice touch. They led up to the kiss rather well. This was a good chapter.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 17 . 10/22/2013
That was a nice not-so-cliche ending. I think you write that well. The awkwardness wasn't overbearing, but it wasn't nonexistent either. This chapter was good.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 16 . 10/20/2013
That is definitely one of the funniest confessions of liking someone, though it wasn't to his face. A couple of missing letters and punctuation marks, but it was a good chapter otherwise.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 15 . 10/20/2013
I caught a small typo, but it's not a big deal. This chapter was really cute.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 14 . 10/20/2013
I know I'm reviewing really late, but I really can't imagine what it would be like to go through an experience like that, to know people in a shooting that horrible... I'm glad we share our faith in God, though!
Aretice N. Treader chapter 13 . 10/20/2013
Lydia isn't being totally oblivious to Lorenzo flirting with her, at the very least. Meeting his family was... entertaining. This chapter was good.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 12 . 10/20/2013
Things are getting a bit more interesting... I didn't see any mistakes in this chapter. Good job!
Aretice N. Treader chapter 11 . 10/20/2013
That was a very strange intervention meeting... I do like that little bit of information about Lydia's reason for not getting into romantic relationships, and, frankly, I kind of agree. I liked this chapter. It was really good.
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