| Reviews for Meet Me at the Altar |
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   jeremy1555 chapter 8 . 4/19 It's a good story so far, Liam seems nice. |
| arushy chapter 1 . 10/22/2015 I love the detail and specifications that you used! It's very well written. |
| Cookie Maker chapter 8 . 10/24/2013 This story is alot like Maid Sama so sweet |
| drown in my desire chapter 9 . 7/19/2013 It's been more than a year... Are you going to update soon? |
| drown in my desire chapter 8 . 7/19/2013 Why wouldn't engagement photo shoots go well? I don't really feel like Liam and Nora have any chemistry... |
| drown in my desire chapter 7 . 7/19/2013 I like Josh already :) I'm choosing to believe that the subliminal message in Josh's words were - don't get married to Brooke! |
| drown in my desire chapter 6 . 7/19/2013 It's great that Nora wants her studio to be her own but if she wants a studio at all she should accept her dad's money. :P |
| drown in my desire chapter 5 . 7/19/2013 Liam isn't happy because he's engaged to a bitch! LOL |
| drown in my desire chapter 4 . 7/19/2013 Poor drunk Nora! And ew, Brooke is a total bitch. |
| drown in my desire chapter 3 . 7/15/2013 Aw, poor Nora. |
| drown in my desire chapter 2 . 7/15/2013 Hot Nora! I love Tristan :) |
| drown in my desire chapter 1 . 7/15/2013 Wow it's been a long time since I logged on to FP. And what a nice welcome I got! This story is full of promise. :) |
| Dreamers-Requiem chapter 8 . 5/8/2013 Again, I feel like a lot of this is too much telling and not enough showing. Nora at times doesn’t feel like a photographer; I’d think someone who takes pictures for a living would have a lot more attention to detail, and adding in something to her personality would make her come alive more to the reader. A lot of the descriptions are a bit vague, so maybe you could expand on them to give her more of a vibe. [everyone wasn't always all smiles for engagement photo shoots, and most times it required a good amount of effort on both the photographer's part as well as the couple's to create that romantic atmosphere.] Why not? This might just be a personal thing, but I don’t get why a couple wouldn’t be happy with their engagement photos. Maybe you could expand on that a little? Some of this felt a little rushed, and there doesn’t really feel like there’s any chemistry between Liam and Nora. I feel like there should be a bit more build up before he starts spilling his guts to her. I also feel like you’ve crammed a lot of his backstory in. Why is he suddenly telling Nora all of this? It makes him come across as a bit…weak. Especially in terms of Brooke. Makes him almost unlikable. I think you could spread it out a bit more, hint towards his feelings rather than have him state them so explicitly. And be careful with POV; you switch between Liam and Nora in points and it makes more sense to stick to Nora. As always, hope this helps. |
| roni2010-tealyellow chapter 1 . 5/6/2013 love it.. onward to see, what will happen next.. |
| Music.Sets.Me.Free chapter 1 . 11/18/2012 This is such a great story so far! It has a great hook and I am already interested! Nora seems like a great, realistic character and easy to relate to! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I hope you post more soon! This plot seems very unique and fun! 3 s/3037894/1/The-Ballad-of-Mona-Lisa |