|Reviews for Different Directions|
| Fragile Things chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
i rly enjoyed this as well. it's crazy because i had my junior prom the past school year and felt the same way, you just related it very beautifully. great work here. wish the formatting had worked out for you.
| Casino Kat chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Ohmygod. That made me tear up. It also hit pretty close to home. My prom didn't turn out how I wanted it to, either. But bravo on putting this down, I didn't have the guts to write how I felt. 'Tis heartbreakingly beautiful.
Here's to the misunderstood dreamers.
| Ruby Kart chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
Very unique. And, sad too. Sorry your prom didn't turn out to be fun - but more of an internal battle. I'm a little confused by this line:
"heI lust to beld" I'm not sure what the words are supposed to say (although, I did get all the other ones). I'm sure it would be easier if it wasn't on FP and the formatting wasn't the way it is.
I can't tell whether I enjoyed the poem or not. I don't relate - but putting myself in the author's shoes leaves me confused, and saddened - which I'm sure were your emotions that night.
Very challenging piece and creative idea.